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I thought that was great, the pitch wasn't to high or too low, the quality wasn't bad and the song itself was enjoyable. I find that modern music is sad or angry, but I found this tune very relaxing.
One hint I can give you from my experience... When most people hear the sample, they will turn it off if nothing eventful happens in the first 5 seconds. So at the start, try and add a little extra spark to keep the listeners listening :D.
Other than that it seems that you put quite a bit of effort in it and I'm really looking forward to more of your music pieces.
Overall my 5 belongs to you.
Will
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